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You were almost eight and a half months pregnant and you still couldn’t think of names for your twins.  It was the hardest thing for you to decide alone.  You wished that Gilbert would have at least told you what names he would like for your children.  Since you were stressing over picking names your mother decided to bring you shopping for baby clothes and car seats.  Through out the day you felt pain in your stomach and back but you were used to feeling pain so you didn’t pay it much attention.  After a long day of shopping you were on your way home when you felt something wet dripping down your leg.  Your eyes widen when you realized what was going on.

“Mom my water broke.” you said freaking out.  Your mother quickly pulled out her cell phone dialing a number before handing you the phone.  

“Hello?” you heard Gilbert’s voice on the other line.

“Gilbert.” you mumbled into the phone not sure what to say next.

“What do you want?” he asked sounding aggravated.

“….my water.” you mumbled until you felt a sharp pain in your stomach area.

“Speak up.” he fussed at you.

“My water broke and it hurts!” you cried through the pain of labor.  You heard the sound of Gilbert’s phone falling to the ground.  The next voice you heard was Ludwig talking to his brother.

‘What’s wrong did something happen?’ Ludwig asked his brother with worry in his voice.

‘______ just went into labor!’ you heard Gilbert freaking out over the phone.

‘That’s wonderful you’ll be a father soon.’ you heard Francis say cheerfully.  The sound of someone running was the next thing you heard before hearing Ludwig yell after his brother who you guess was running.

‘Idiot you don’t even know which hospital she’s in get back here!’ Ludwig yelled.  You listened as the phone was picked up.

“Hello, ______ what hospital are you going to?” he asked.

“…. the one… near… the…MALL!” you screamed between the deep breathes.  

“We’ll be there soon I have to find Gilbert he just ran out the house.” Ludwig said while you cried out in pain.

-------------------------Hospital-----------------------

Your mother parked her car at the hospital entrance before running inside.  When she returned a nurse came out with her.  You looked at the blonde short haired nurse who was pushing a wheelchair.

“Hey ________ I’m Amelia.  Can you tell me when the labor pains started?” she asked.

“A few hours ago when I was in the mall with my mother but I thought it was just the babies were kicking.” you cried in pain.  You were amazed by how easy Amelia was about to pick you up and place you into the wheelchair.

“I see.  Well let’s get you into a room then call your doctor.” Amelia smiled pushing you into the hospital.  

After a few minutes were placed into a room and Dr. Dales was called in to deliver your twins.  Your mother talked to Ludwig who said they were about ten minutes away from the hospital.  Your father who was already working at the house was paged and told about your labor.

“Tuuuuulllippppppppp!” your father yelled bursting into your room with tears in his eyes.  He pushed your mother to the side so he could wrap his arms around you.  Your father snuggled his face close to your as he mumbled to you as if you were still a baby.

“Dad your making a scene.” you mumbled as Amelia looked at your father with her bright blue eyes.

“It’s no big deal.  So Dr. _______ will you be staying in for the deliver?” Amelia asked running her fingers through her dusty blonde hair.

“No way in heck is he staying in here.  He passed out when I had our daughter.  He can’t handle watching two delivers.” your mother said with a frown on her face.

“Alright well do you know if the father would like to be in the room during the deliver?” Amelia asked.  Before you could speak your father started to answer.

“There’s no way he’s going to be looking at my Tulip!” your father answered.

“He already saw her already dear.  Or did you for get how babies are made.” your mother said with a child like smirk on her face.  Your father eyes widened knowing that your mother was right and that only led to him crying about how you were deflowered.

--------------------Delivery-------------------

Gilbert and Ludwig arrived a few minutes before Dr. Dales.  Your mother and Ludwig had to drag your father away from your room so Dr. Dales could deliver the children.  Surprisingly Gilbert held your hand during the delivery of each of the children.  Your daughter was born first and four minutes later your son was born.  You were weak from all the screaming and pushing but you could see the happy and proud look on Gilbert’s face as he cut the cord of each of the babies.

“How are they?” you asked him weakly as sweat dripped down your face.

“Their both fine but the doctor wants to watch them over night.  She said they’re both small since they’re premature.” Gilbert told you.  Your eyes widened in fear.  You were afraid that something was wrong with your children.  You did your best to fight back tears but you couldn’t help but cry.  You wondered if maybe you did something to cause the premature births.

Gilbert was standing next to the wall when he noticed you crying.  He sighed as he looked at you.

“So did you come up with names?” he asked changing the subject.

“I was thinking Ada and if you wanted we could’ve name our son after you.  If you want.” you said shyly.  You saw a slight bluish appear on Gilbert’s face but you were too weak to wonder why.

“Ada and … Gilbert.  That’s fine with me.” he said as the door opened.  Amelia and another nurse walked in they were both carrying one of your babies.  Amelia and the other nurse brought both babies to you so you could get a good look at your children.  They both inherited their father’s crimson red eyes but surprisingly they both had your hair and skin color.

“They’re beautiful, look Gilbert.” you said happily smiling at the father of your children.  Amelia handed you Ada who looked at you after yawning.

After some private time with the twins your parents and Ludwig were let back into your room.  Your father rushed to your sided looking down at the little girl in your arms.  He smiled happily before kissing your forehead.

“Good job Tulip.  Your little Rose is a cutie.” your father said gently while he smiled.  You guessed he chose that nickname because of her red eyes.

“Congratulations, you two.” Ludwig said with a smile.  Your mother pulled out her camera and signaled Gilbert to stand next to your bed.  

“Get closer Gilbert.  I want to get a perfect picture.” your mother said.  After snapping the picture your mother smiled looking at the image.

“Beautiful, just so flawless.  I knew they were be perfect little darlings.  Come on tell me the names.” your mother said while you handed her your daughter.

“Ada and Gilbert.” Gilbert said as Ludwig looked at his nephew.

“Perfect names.” your mother said with a large smile.
Well I really think this chapter was cute. I hope everyone likes it.

Ps: I couldn't help myself I had to put America in this story in some form.

Also I don't own Hetalia or its characters they belong to Hidekaz Himaruya

Prussia: Gilbert
Germany: Ludwig
Fem!America: Amelia

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Monsterkitty1236 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015
I'm a twin and me and my brother were born 1 early it's quite common for premature 
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Awww I wanted a twin when I was little.  (I didn't know that was usually at the time.)
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Monsterkitty1236 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015
 Yea but me and him are fertenernal twins (boy and girl) people say we don't look alike
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Feb 8, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
well that can be a good thing.  Some twins I know don't like looking a like.  
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sayaikari Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2014
um almost 8 and a half months old isn't really premature if not please correct me
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
It all depends.  With premature births there can be problems even if its not developmental.  But for the most part you're right.
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SakuraDrowned Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Ada is spanish for fairy... :D :D cuteeeee
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
That's a cute name
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YukiSuoh01 Featured By Owner Jan 12, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ada in here the meaning is Have..
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:iconindigodreams100:
IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
really that's cool
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IfYouSayYouLoveMe Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is an improvement but GIL YOU BETTER LOVE ME NOW ;3;
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nexth8rmony Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Both my dad and my mom would probably kill Gilbert and disown me.... :(  Ada and Gilbert are so cute though!
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
My mom would kill me after the child is born.  My dad would sit me down and have a talk about what I did was wrong.
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Nope, her name is Aria Janet Marie and my son us Daryon James >> those are their names. Sorry Gil but no Gil Jr.

Anyway, cute~ rather fast labor hahah~
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the girl name
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Thanks^^ She's named after my mom, the Janet Marie part and James is for my Uncle.
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
So cute.  I thought about naming my child after my aunt if I ever have a girl
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Silvia-x-Gaara Featured By Owner Aug 4, 2013
Aww^^
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bluezebra8675309 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
If i remember right, its really normal for twins to be born prematurely, so Reader has nothing to worry about^^
ps, love the america who snuck in^w^
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yeah I couldn't help myself.
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bluezebra8675309 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
with the kids or 'MURICA?
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:iconindigodreams100:
IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
putting America in the story
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Yami-noTenshi Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
...I like everything, from the execution to the lot, the drama and the humour, but one thing bugs me... I really don't like that name... >.> just a random thought... >.>
Well anyway, good job with the story otherwise ^.^
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
thank you.
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animelover-8 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aww he held my hand
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I know really sweet
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animelover-8 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yup
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animelover-8 Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
While I'm screaming in pain -.-'
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KashTheKat Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconfacepalmplz: Of course the baby's name was going to be Gilbert! xD
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
lol yeah I couldn't find any other name I liked.
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time-is-toxic Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Student General Artist
D'awww this was cute! :heart:
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
glad you liked it
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jambalambam Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D'awww :'D
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leakittychan Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
will you hate me very much if I say it's impossible for the babies to have red eyes? only if the reader has a bad gene which causes the albinism but the babies would be full albinos then. but since reader has healthy genes, the babies both inherit her colors, nothing from Gil >.<
other than that I loved this series
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't mind. I just wanted them to have red eyes. Albinism runs in my family so I understand how it works. I just really really really wanted red eyes.
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leakittychan Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
alright then :D I have always wanted to meet an albino person o.o yes, I think those red eyes must be mesmerizing... <3
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah it runs in my father's family. I think the red eyes would be wonderful
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leakittychan Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
I'm so jealous of you right now X3
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yashacat Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
lol Awesome
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goodlucklight Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Gilbert Jr..
Doesn't sound bad at all~
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SakuraPrincess15 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Student Writer
It getting better and better and GILBERT CONFESS ALREADY!!
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm happy you think so :iconhontoplz:
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ProMeowMeow Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS EPIC :iconfreeinternetplz: YOU WIN THE INTERNET
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
AWESOME!!!!!!!!
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purpleprankster99 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Finally he held my hand during childbirth...AT LEAST HE GAVE ME SOME AFFECTION!! Oh and yeah I wouldn't have just held his hand, my family has a history of violent births. My mom kicked my dad in the balls when I was being born...XD
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so sorry but made me laugh. Your poor dad.
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purpleprankster99 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013
Yeah...I hope my future husband doesn't have to go through that, but he probably will XD
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Telfly Featured By Owner May 15, 2013
Awww :3 now I can go to sleep in peace !! Good night everybody !!
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IndigoDreams100 Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
sweet dreams :iconahehplz:
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REQ--Hetalia-Writer Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
SHIT THIS IS SO GOOD! XD
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